minervacat: (stargate - john and rodney)
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Title: recognized none but the southern cross
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Word Count: 1000 words, on the nose.
Disclaimer: Wow, so not mine.
Summary: Constellations are scientifically meaningless, Rodney tells him.


Counting by Earth time, they have been in the Pegasus Galaxy for 18 months, 2 weeks, and 4 days when Rodney wanders out onto a balcony, leans against the railing beside John, and assigns the first name to an Atlantean constellation. The first English name, Rodney says; the Ancients, I'm certain, have names for them already, but no one's bothered to tell me what they are.

I'm tired of not being able to find my way home, Rodney says, and then he looks around, sees no one, and kisses John.

Rodney calls the first star, the brightest star, Polaris, and when John goes to shove Rodney away he ends up with his hand curled against the line of Rodney's jaw, and Rodney's mouth feels like home.

*


Routine mission, but they're sleeping outside because the natives aren't quite civilized enough to have a pool house, and Ronon, on his back with his hands behind his head, says, On Sateda, we called that one Bow of Arkis. He's quiet for a minute, and John can almost hear the frown in his voice.

Teyla says, We call it Inmya's Shoulder.

Rodney hates the anthropologists that the SGC forced on them the last Daedalus trip around, but he loves to know things, and he says, Why? The silence is puzzled in the dark, and Rodney says, Why did you call it that? Myth, legend, folklore? Most of the constellations on Earth are named for mythological figures, in a number of cultures. Why those names?

Teyla has first watch; John falls asleep listening to Rodney count the stars.

*


Rodney opens the floodgates; no one in Atlantis is certain why they hadn't named the constellations before, but once they've started, stopping seems pointless. Rodney pulls names from Norse mythology; the anthropologists from cultures and planets that the SGC has sent teams to before this. A geologist from New Zealand gives unpronounceable Maori names to three groupings. They adopt Athosian names for some, Ancient names deciphered from the database for others, and Ronon names a handful, carefully spelling out the Sateden alphabet for a linguist in the mess hall.

Polaris sticks, still the brightest in the sky, and they end up with a scattering of constellations that share names with counterparts on Earth.

John names only one; pencils carefully on the star chart that's appeared on a wall in one of the conference rooms. Three stars, evenly spaced, all in a row, and so faint that you can barely see them from the balconies of the city, the glow of Atlantis too bright.

He points it out to Rodney late, past today and well into tomorrow, and Rodney leans against him and huffs, Light pollution, in another goddamned galaxy.

John calls it The Sword of Orion.

*


It is not so much that the rules are changed, but that even with the Daedalus doing regular drive-bys, the rules simply fall away - the U.S. Marines still make up the better part of John's fighting force, but there are Japanese now, too, and Russians and a handful of Brits. The first time Zelenka tries to explain Don't Ask, Don't Tell to a Russian fighter pilot with a gene almost as strong as John's, the look he gets in return is comical; Rodney tells John about it later, curled against John's side, pointing out a constellation named by a biologist that afternoon.

It's called the Seven Swans, neat V-shaped clusters of stars that look like birds on a child's drawing.

The biologist is dating the Russian pilot; Zelenka is seeing a pretty British paratrooper with long legs and great breasts. Rodney relates all the gossip on Atlantis in the same way he tells John what new star clusters idiot botanists have named after allergen producing flowers back on Earth - it's all just news to him, information to be shared.

He tells John the constellations he's named himself in a totally different voice; not for the first time, John wonders if the astro in Rodney's degrees is more important than the physics.

*


John loves to fly because, in part, the sky goes on forever - the horizon is deceptive. But even as a kid, he never wanted to go into space; planes and helicopters were good enough for him. The sky is endless and that's a comfort, sometimes, but it's a danger, too, and after they start naming the stars, John dreams more than once of flying a jumper through the Pegasus Galaxy, completely unable to find Polaris, unable to find his own way home.

Constellations are scientifically meaningless, Rodney tells him.

You had a telescope when you were a kid, didn't you, John asks.

Three, Rodney says. I had three.

Orion was the only one I could find, John says. Not even the Big Dipper.

Rodney laughs, and later, when he's fucking John slow and sure, he whispers the names of Earth constellations against the back of John's neck. Andromeda. Cassiopeia. The Seven Sisters. Aquarius. Capricorn. Perseus.

John comes, shuddering, when Rodney presses his mouth against John's ear and says, Pegasus.

*


On Atlantis, the sky changes by degrees as the months pass, the same as on Earth; John expects everyone to lose interest, eventually, before a year has passed and the stars are the same again. No one does.

The sky shifts, time passes; every off-world mission, John finds himself with his head tipped up, searching for patterns that are different on this planet than on Atlantis. He never sees them, but Rodney can pick out the strange patterns, the constellations here (wherever here is at the time) that are not the same as on Atlantis.

On PX4-65N, John actually finds one; a double-barred cross, directly overhead. Rodney says, Call it the Southern Cross.

It actually turns out to be visible from the southern hemisphere of the planet Atlantis is on; the planet they still have not named. John pencils it on the star chart, very carefully: the Southern Cross, anchoring the other side of the world, and Polaris, the North Star, calling them home.

*


author's notes: title from mason jennings, "southern cross". with a big helping of love for carrboro, north carolina's serious lack of light pollution.
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posted by [identity profile] bluebrocade.livejournal.com at 12:02am on 16/03/2006
Lovely!
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:55pm on 16/03/2006
thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] direaliete.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 16/03/2006
Rodney laughs, and later, when he's fucking John slow and sure, he whispers the names of Earth constellations against the back of John's neck. Andromeda. Cassiopeia. The Seven Sisters. Aquarius. Capricorn. Perseus.

John comes, shuddering, when Rodney presses his mouth against John's ear and says, Pegasus.

This paragraph made my toes curl! :)

Wonderful ;)
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posted by [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com at 12:59am on 16/03/2006
This was lovely!
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:55pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
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posted by [personal profile] aurora at 01:26am on 16/03/2006
This is fantastic. Thanks for writing it!
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:56pm on 16/03/2006
i'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] denyeverything1.livejournal.com at 02:05am on 16/03/2006
the Southern Cross, anchoring the other side of the world, and Polaris, the North Star, calling them home

The ache and beauty of being in a fantastical new world so very far from home came through so clearly in this. Magical writing. Thank you.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:56pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] mahoy.livejournal.com at 02:16am on 16/03/2006
Oh this was pretty.
This brought to mind the many, many hours spent in Alaska waiting for the clouds to clear just to see the Big Dipper. When I moved to Arizona to go to school, I was shocked at how bright, how frightfully near the stars seemed away from city lights.
To this day, I can immediately find the Big Dipper, but the only other constellation I can automatically see is Orion, which is by far my favorite.
:sigh: This makes me want to go out and stargaze for a while.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:57pm on 16/03/2006
for years, orion was the only one i could find, too - i took an astronomy class in college and now i can find four. *grin*

thank you so much. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] dracostella.livejournal.com at 02:44am on 16/03/2006
This was lovely lovely writing. I especially like the ending partly because I had forgotten which star Polaris was until the end.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:57pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] vylit.livejournal.com at 03:05am on 16/03/2006
John comes, shuddering, when Rodney presses his mouth against John's ear and says, Pegasus.

Oh, babe, I love this so much that I just want to curl up with you and pet your hair and have you tell more more Atlantis stories.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:58pm on 16/03/2006
oh, honey, yay, thank you. *draws heart around you*

come over, i'll make tea and tell you stories.
 
posted by [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com at 03:18am on 16/03/2006
Very beautiful. Thanks.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:58pm on 16/03/2006
thank you. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com at 03:49am on 16/03/2006
That was absolutely gorgeous.

Rodney laughs, and later, when he's fucking John slow and sure, he whispers the names of Earth constellations against the back of John's neck. Andromeda. Cassiopeia. The Seven Sisters. Aquarius. Capricorn. Perseus.

John comes, shuddering, when Rodney presses his mouth against John's ear and says, Pegasus.


Best line I have read in a fic in forever.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 05:59pm on 16/03/2006
eeep, omg, thank you so much. *blush*
 
posted by [identity profile] adannu.livejournal.com at 05:28am on 16/03/2006
Oh, I like this. A lot.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:00pm on 16/03/2006
thank you. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] no-detective.livejournal.com at 08:01am on 16/03/2006
Oh, what a lovely idea, and so beautifully executed.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:00pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] thefourthvine.livejournal.com at 08:22am on 16/03/2006
That was phenomenally gorgeous. I loved it, and not just because the astro was more important than the physics in the classes I took.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:01pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much, darling, it means an immense amount coming from you. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bettina_/ at 02:58pm on 16/03/2006
This is very sweet and nice! :-)
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:02pm on 16/03/2006
thank you! :)
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posted by [personal profile] libitina at 03:47pm on 16/03/2006
He points it out to Rodney late, past today and well into tomorrow, and Rodney leans against him and huffs, Light pollution, in another goddamned galaxy.

John calls it The Sword of Orion.


Damn light pollution.

I like how Orion gets to be his link to the constellations.

I have very fond memories of learning to find Cassiopeia.

Also - Happy Birthday
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:03pm on 16/03/2006
cassiopeia is one of four i can routinely find. :)

and thank you, both for the lovely feedback and the birthday wishes! *smish*
 
posted by [identity profile] tardis80.livejournal.com at 04:49pm on 16/03/2006
as a stargazer, i love this. my favorite stars were Sirius and the Pleiades. hee. i also loved pegasus because there's a legend of star-crossed lovers in there. thanks for this :)
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:03pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much - i'm so glad you liked it. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] franklymydear.livejournal.com at 05:22pm on 16/03/2006
This was gorgeous. I love how the constellations and the repetition tie everything together. I was a little jarred by the shifting POVs, but the overall repetition made it work for me in the end.

Rodney laughs, and later, when he's fucking John slow and sure, he whispers the names of Earth constellations against the back of John's neck. Andromeda. Cassiopeia. The Seven Sisters. Aquarius. Capricorn. Perseus.

Also, this was my favorite line.

 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:04pm on 16/03/2006
(oh, your icon is so lovely! yay.)

thank you so much - i'm glad you enjoyed it, despite my sloppy pov work. *sheepish*
 
posted by [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com at 06:21pm on 16/03/2006
Really beautiful. I love the style you wrote this in - words used so sparingly but each with such impact. It's like art work. Thanks for sharing it.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 10:43pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. *blush*
 
posted by [identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com at 06:33pm on 16/03/2006
How absolutely lovely. I wish I could come up with a more coherent comment than that; this story deserves more. Alas, that's all I have right now. I love this idea and how you wrote it.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 16/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com at 11:46pm on 16/03/2006
John pencils it on the star chart, very carefully: the Southern Cross, anchoring the other side of the world, and Polaris, the North Star, calling them home.

You made my heart sigh.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 01:46am on 17/03/2006
eeeep, thank you! *blush*
 
posted by [identity profile] raucousraven.livejournal.com at 01:22am on 17/03/2006
beautiful. delightful. i love how the stars anchor the Atlantis crew into their new galaxy, the idea that they are in the midst of creating a new mythology out of magipie pieces of the old.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 01:47am on 17/03/2006
magpie pieces. yes. exactly.

and thank you. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] purna.livejournal.com at 05:17am on 17/03/2006
Oh, this is absolutely lovely. I love all this implies...they name the constellations so they can find their way home, Atlantis, and John's home is Rodney and Atlantis.

This made me all warm and happy.
 
posted by [identity profile] purna.livejournal.com at 05:17am on 17/03/2006
Here via lamardeuse's rec, by the way. :)
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posted by [personal profile] girlpearl at 11:31am on 18/03/2006
That was so beautiful and soothing. Thank you.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:05pm on 19/03/2006
your icon is absolutely lovely. \o/
 
posted by [identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com at 04:45pm on 19/03/2006
like a sky full of stars.
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:05pm on 19/03/2006
thank you, hon. yay. *heart*
 
posted by [identity profile] endora-taylor.livejournal.com at 05:46pm on 19/03/2006
i love this idea. naming the constellations. and i love that they choose names from all different cultures, everyone pitching in and getting excited about it.

and this: John comes, shuddering, when Rodney presses his mouth against John's ear and says, Pegasus.

that's one of the hottest lines i have ever read. excellent work!
 
posted by [identity profile] minervacat.livejournal.com at 06:06pm on 19/03/2006
thank you so much. :)
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