posted by [identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com at 04:42am on 12/04/2005
God, this is excellent. Ray's so real, here--I believed every word of the history you gave him, and I loved how smoothly you tied it to his love for his city. There are so many wonderful, vivid details in this, too. You really brought this city to life (and made me wish I lived there! *g*). So glad you've found your way to DS!

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